Sketch02.

A new tutor I am here at AmateurArtistArmy 
I'd like to offer a short critique upon your piece.

I understand the subject matter is to be abstract as is...
but when I first saw this... I didnt even know it was a human, I only saw the fire fist and....spear/axe/staff

While I do love the shading effect and the motion of the 'ghostly' tail...ghostly... is that a word... spectre tail
it was hard to tell what this was

But do not get discouraged
this is just me suggesting to try less glare and more lines for your works... just an idea.
thats just me.





((its still really cool looking^^))